
Hey everyone! 'Gearin' Up to Get an Agent Blogorama' is now on its second week. It's not too late to join in the rest of the festivities, just click the logo on the sidebar if you're interested.
This time we're working on a story chain. I had a lot of fun with this and it has been a pleasure to work in collaboration with such talented writers! For the post before mine, click here. Or click here to start at the very beginning of our tale!
The holly bush in Dio’s front yard broke her clumsy fall from the sky. Still, not too shabby for her first time in the air. She scrambled up from the bush; plucking sharp leaves from her dress and hair. Her dress was wrecked, torn and covered in grease and soot from the motorcycle earlier.
But the dress would have to wait; she had more important things to contend with. She marched into the house, straight to the study. It took her all of a second to realize the book wasn’t there. She quickly scanned the bookshelf again, searching for its purple cover, her fingers tapping the empty space where she could have sworn she’d left it.
Without the book how would she ever get out of this mess? She sagged to the floor. It was over. Hopeless.
Then an idea came to her. One she quickly shooed away. She wouldn’t, couldn’t do what she was thinking. Her father had died getting her out of there--poisoned from the toxin of a fairy bite. He was the one who’d saved her from the creatures in Nefnia Forest, from the makers of the Wish Granter book. She couldn’t go back, asking for help, not now, especially with the book she’d stolen from them having gone missing.
“They’ll surely kill me,” Dio whispered into the empty room. She shook her head. She had to try. This time would be different; she was stronger now, she’d arm herself with salt, she’d use her light. They really hate the light.
And then they’d be forced to do her bidding, they would have to help her find her parents.
Dio slowly came to her feet and headed upstairs to change. She picked her outfit carefully. A t-shirt and shorts, sneakers. Light and unrestrictive, the perfect attire for the task ahead. She knew once she hit the sandy bank at the edge the forest, she’d be running as if her life depended on it.
My assignment was: With the knowledge the MC has gained (see last post) help her make a plan to get what she wants. Your words are: bank, t-shirt, salt.












Oh, I love the fairy element and creatures of the woods...
ReplyDeleteNice touch sending her into a creepy forest! I can't wait to see what happens next :)
ReplyDeleteNice! I love all that back story stuff.
ReplyDeleteEasily the best link in the chain so far :) Nice job -- I really enjoy your writing! It's confident and descriptive without at all sounding amateurish. Really well done!
ReplyDeleteNice and such unexpected back story!
ReplyDeleteYay for nonbinding clothes because you're setting us up for more action! :) Cool fairy element.
ReplyDeleteThanks for your warm comments. In regards to the backstory-I was as surprised as you are. I was trying to bring all the details together while working in a new plan for Dio. Two different writers brought up her dad being dead, so I wanted to nail that down (guess it must be her stepdad that is MIA) Dio is a pixie, so fairies seemed like a natural enemy, and the book has brought her nothing but trouble-for me it only made sense that it had something to do with her father's death. Hope my take wasn't too jarring to the story!
ReplyDeleteInteresting details to fill out the story. I enjoyed reading your bit!
ReplyDeleteYay! I love the introduction of the fairy bite. And the confidence Dio has. Great addition ^_^
ReplyDeleteSo glad Dio found a solution and is going for it!
ReplyDeleteGlad you got the pixie part and brought it back with the addition of fairies. Love what you did! Things are getting back on track.
ReplyDeletethis is so fun...i did something similar on FB where i gave each person the previous line, and they had to write the next line. it was so fun as they have no clue what was written before them or what it's about. sometimes i gave them a title! then i posted the whole story for them to read. it's hilarious! i may have to do this again...maybe with the bloggers this time!
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Hiya oomph! That does sound like fun! I'm game if you do it on blogger (don't have a fb account)!
ReplyDeleteLove the fairy bite! Great job
ReplyDeleteThis is such a fun turn of events!
ReplyDeleteI like that she is determined.
ReplyDeleteNice use the previous scenes. I love it.
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